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Regarding The Miracle of Time

I am feeling good about Moonlight Mistress. It’s as if, now that the revision letter is addressed and the manuscript is out of my hands, it’s slowly begun to gather to itself a sort of halo, a glow of being … Continue reading

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Some Notes on Revising a Manuscript: Refining the Prose

Some Notes on Revising a Manuscript: Refining the Prose Refining the prose is best saved for last; you don’t want to spend time polishing something that will later be cut. If any words don’t support the plot or characterization or … Continue reading

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Some Notes on Revising a Manuscript: Coherence and Storytelling

Some Notes on Revising a Manuscript: Coherence and Storytelling On a first read of a completed manuscript, it’s a good time to check for overall coherence and storytelling. Check for skipped time and space. It helps the reader if you … Continue reading

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Underwriting

When I draft a story, I am almost always an underwriter. I write less than I could; I write less than a reader might need to fully comprehend a character or setting. Then, when I go back and read over … Continue reading

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Zero Drafting

It’s amazing how many words one can put down when one is trying not to care about them. It’s impossible for me not to care at all–on a computer, I am constantly making small changes in word choice or in … Continue reading

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Caring About Your Characters – Or Not

Do you have to care about your characters and their story to write it? Do you have to invent characters you like before writing? Some people say yes. I say no, at least not at the beginning of the process. … Continue reading

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The Art of Letting Go – Finishing the Novel

When is it time to stop working on a manuscript? I might as well say now, this post is going to be one of my least concrete. Last week, February 26, I turned in The Moonlight Mistress. I’d turned in … Continue reading

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Learning Who Your Characters Are

I am not one of those writers whose characters talk to them, not in the literal hearing-voices-in-your-head way, nor do I like using that as a metaphor for character creation. Probably because I like to be in control. I also … Continue reading

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Revisions Take Time

I have rediscovered something, while working on revisions for The Moonlight Mistress: available time to write does not directly translate into wordcount. If I’m writing dialogue or description, but most especially dialogue, the words pile up faster. Word acquisition slows … Continue reading

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Valentine Playlist

Valentine Playlist “Sunday Kind of Love,” Etta James“Whatta Man,” Salt-N-Pepa with En Vogue“Dance Me to the End of Love,” Madeleine Peyroux“The Queen of Argyll,” Silly Wizard“Trouble,” Alannah Myles“Lover’s Cross,” Jim Croce“No Ordinary Love,” Deftones (Sade cover)“Love’s Divine,” Seal“Baby, I Love … Continue reading

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