Some Thoughts on Nairobi Heat by Mukoma wa Ngugi

Mukoma wa Ngugi’s first novel, Nairobi Heat, involves themes including African Americans in their relationship to Africans as well as outcomes of the Rwandan genocide, both for those who suffered and those who viewed from afar. The themes of the novel play into the tropes of detective novels in an interesting way. The moral concerns of noir detective novels are very present and densely complex, and the tone of the narration references classic hardboiled detective novels in that it is unsentimental and matter-of-fact, even when horrible events are being portrayed. The main difference from classic American hardboiled novels is that most of the story takes place in Nairobi, called “Nairobbery” by a local detective.

African-American police detective Ishmael Fofona (“Call me Ishmael”) is assigned a case in which a dead young white woman is found on the doorstep of a famous African professor, Joshua Hakizimana. Hakizimana saved a thousand lives in the Rwandan genocide, and started a multimillion dollar charity. An anonymous tip causes the Madison, WI police department to send Ishmael to Kenya, where the charity is based. His local guide is nicknamed “O.” In Nairobi, Ishmael encounters a range of characters at all levels of Kenyan society, from a group of young thugs to a wealthy white man who, hiding out in his mansion and protected by white South African mercenaries, mockingly pretends to be a rural African while still holding on to his privilege. Ishmael is forced to make hard choices that, it’s implied, are a direct result of Kenyan political conditions, such as rescuing a young girl from rape only to be forced into killing those who defended the rapist.

Seeing through Ishmael’s eyes, the reader is given an outsider’s view of Nairobi, with local, sometimes contrasting, opinions provided by O. Ishmael has a tendency to use what he experiences in Nairobi as synecdoche for Africa as a whole. This technique provided some fascinating intersectionality to the narrative.

As a mystery reader, I was thrown out of the story more than once by the fantastical nature of the murder case. Used to reading police procedurals, I had a hard time believing that the victim remained unidentified for so long, that a small police department could afford to send one of its detectives on a short-notice flight to Africa, and that there was so little government intervention into such a high-profile case. An eventual twist, identifying the difficulty of identifying the victim, came too late to change my impression. However, these minor issues didn’t affect my overall enjoyment of the novel and its complexities.

Ishmael’s first-person narration sets him up as a classic hardboiled detective, with the added characteristic of providing insight into how Americans, and specifically African-Americans, view Africa and its people. While in Africa, he reflects upon his position in society back in America, adding depth to the moral narrative. Reinforcing this, repeatedly Africans call him mzungu, which means white man. Ishmael is enraged by their expectation that because he is American, he is not like them. Later, a plot twist based on similar expectations is an important part of the plot.

Ishmael is a hardboiled narrator, but several times O proves to be even more hardboiled and fatalistic, calling himself a “philosopher,” and by his actions showing himself to be much more ruthless. Ishmael, who vomits after each time he kills someone, is
perhaps intended as commentary on political realities faced in Africa but not by Americans. This type of contrast to reinforce the novel’s theme was, for me, the most interesting part of the novel, and rewarded my reading.

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Historical Sex Linkgasm

Today, a few links about Sex! In! History!

Lesley Hall’s Victorian Sex Factoids. Want to know what historians know about those “treatments for hysteria”? This is the page for you.

Also at Lesley’s site, The Condom Page, with useful bibliography, and The Clitoris: Historical Myths and Facts.

Studies in Scarlet: Marriage and Sexuality in the U.S. and the U.K., 1815-1914, a Harvard University Library Virtual Collection. Click Browse Indexes to see the available documents.

OutHistory.org – “OutHistory.org is a website in development about gender and sexual history, a site that, at its best, should encourage us to think deeply and critically about historical evidence and what it means to understand LGBT and heterosexual life in the perspective of society and time…OutHistory.org is produced by The Center for Lesbian and Gay Studies (CLAGS), located at the City University of New York Graduate Center.” Check out “Visualizing the Man-Monster,” an original on-line exhibit about an 1836 court case in New York City.

The Leather Archives and Museum collections. They host an amusing online exhibit: “Was Benjamin Franklin Kinky?”.

Several of scholar Judy Greenaway’s published articles on gender and sexuality are available for download.

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“Pro Patria,” Owen Seaman

Pro Patria

England, in this great fight to which you go
Because, where Honour calls you, go you must,
Be glad, whatever comes, at least to know
You have your quarrel just.

Peace was your care; before the nations’ bar
Her cause you pleaded and her ends you sought;
But not for her sake, being what you are,
Could you be bribed and bought.

Others may spurn the pledge of land to land,
May with the brute sword stain a gallant past;
But by the seal to which you set your hand,
Thank God, you still stand fast!

Forth, then, to front that peril of the deep
With smiling lips and in your eyes the light,
Steadfast and confident, of those who keep
Their storied ’scutcheon bright.

And we, whose burden is to watch and wait,—
High-hearted ever, strong in faith and prayer,—
We ask what offering we may consecrate,
What humble service share.

To steel our souls against the lust of ease;
To bear in silence though our hearts may bleed;
To spend ourselves, and never count the cost,
For others’ greater need;—

To go our quiet ways, subdued and sane;
To hush all vulgar clamour of the street;
With level calm to face alike the strain
Of triumph or defeat;

This be our part, for so we serve you best,
So best confirm their prowess and their pride,
Your warrior sons, to whom in this high test
Our fortunes we confide.

August 12, 1914

–Owen Seaman

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Sometimes, you need comics.

I read a lot. I’m a writer, it’s a vital part of what you might call my Continuing Education. Lately, I’ve been returning to comics.

Part of that is due to all the superhero movies that came out this summer, most of which I saw. Those movies reminded me of how devoted I was to following various comic series (The Uncanny X-Men, Daredevil, etc.) in my teen years and early twenties, and how much I learned about story from them, especially ongoing story in the soap opera vein. I also learned quite a lot about characterization, and how it can be built over time (or not be built over time, depending!) using both repetition and small increments of new information.

Since I’m currently in the early stages of formulating a new series proposal, I think these are valuable lessons. It’s been a while since I regularly read comics, but I think that’s all to the good. I’m older now, with wider reading and writing experience, plus I have some critical distance from stories I read a couple of decades ago.

I’ve been re-reading some classics, and searching out some of the new classics, mostly bound together in graphic novel format. It’s been interesting to look at story techniques that depend both on words and images. I’m remembering some of my favorite characters and recognizing how they’ve been present in my own work; I’m thinking of how I can turn that into an advantage for the future. I’m being reminded of the many ways cliffhangers can be used to enrich a story, and examining worldbuilding techniques from a new angle.

I always learn something when I approach writing from a new and different angle.

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More Retro Cherries, Some of them Picked




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Goliath is out today!

I blogged about Scott Westerfeld’s Leviathan series at Heroes and Heartbreakers yesterday.

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Thinking About (Erotic) Word Choice

I was recently reading a marriage of convenience romance story with erotic content.

The story’s tone was very serious: the couple were initially forced into being together, and there was a lot of complicated angst on the part of the hero. It had lots of complicated conflict. Overall, I liked the story.

However, in the first sex scene, I burst out laughing. Why? A metaphor. It wasn’t that the metaphor was bad. It was actually very evocative. But…one phrase the author used dramatically did not fit the rest of the story’s tone. It was an occasion when word choice made all the difference to my reading experience.

I’m not going to quote the phrase because I don’t want to identify the story. Here are the essential bits, though. While in the hero’s point of view, the writer described the heroine’s clitoris using a culinary metaphor…and not a romantic one, either, but an oddly prosaic and unromantic combination of foods. The hero was engaged in sex with the heroine while he thought this in what was meant to be an emotionally intense scene. The comparison might have been appropriate if true to the hero’s character (though he was never again obsessed with food in the story, so I don’t think that was it, and no further food metaphors were used). It didn’t matter, anyway, because the absurdity of the description stuck out so badly I couldn’t help but notice.

Once I notice a strange metaphor, my sense of the ludicrous takes over, and I can’t take the scene seriously any more. I end up dwelling on that phrase far more than the writer intended. It distracts me.

Sex is silly enough on its own, without the writer’s help. If the reader is distracted, the writer’s lost them.

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“Thomas of the Light Heart,” Owen Seaman

Thomas of the Light Heart

Facing the guns, he jokes as well
As any Judge upon the Bench;
Between the crash of shell and shell
His laughter rings along the trench;
He seems immensely tickled by a
Projectile which he calls a “Black Maria.”

He whistles down the day-long road,
And, when the chilly shadows fall
And heavier hangs the weary load,
Is he down-hearted? Not at all.
’T is then he takes a light and airy
View of the tedious route to Tipperary.

His songs are not exactly hymns;
He never learned them in the choir;
And yet they brace his dragging limbs
Although they miss the sacred fire;
Although his choice and cherished gems
Do not include “The Watch upon the Thames.”

He takes to fighting as a game;
He does no talking, through his hat,
Of holy missions; all the same
He has his faith—be sure of that;
He’ll not disgrace his sporting breed,
Nor play what is n’t cricket. There’s his creed.

October, 1914

–Owen Seaman

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Talking about Comics at NINC

I’m a guest at the Novelists, Inc. blog today: Sometimes You Need Comics.

I have another “Fresh Meat” post up at The Criminal Element, this one on J.T. Ellison’s new novel, Where All the Dead Lie.

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Degrees of Suckitude

I was recently discussing a story-in-progress with someone. I ventured to hope that it didn’t suck. I was told there was no way it could suck, given excerpts she had seen.

Au contraire! There are degrees of suckitude. (That is a technical phrase which I have just invented.)

The Degree of Suckitude, or D-Suck, cannot be determined objectively. It is rather a subjective quality (suck-jective?) that varies depending on both internal and external factors. Internal factors are, for the most part, internal to the writer of the Sucky Story, though the reader’s state of mind might also cause a given story to Suck more violently than it would under other circumstances. External factors influencing D-Suck include rapidly-approaching deadlines, printer jams, and reviews of previous stories by the same author.

For example, the story I mentioned above. It was in progress as one type of story. Then I needed to change it to another type of story. While I was in the process of doing so, perfectly adequate draft scenes were suddenly no longer suited to their original purpose, so their D-Suck skyrocketed, exacerbated by internal factors including “why didn’t I leave it the way it was?!” Thus, when a new, cobbled together draft was completed, I still felt that the story Sucked. The draft was Done (and Done is Good) but at the same time, like Schrödinger’s cat, it was Sucky. Or might have been.

Hey, it all makes perfect sense to me.

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