Sex scenes in romance novels, I feel, need to move the plot along by encompassing some sort of character change or modulation. But what else makes a sex scene a success? Clearly, it’s one of those questions in which individual mileage can vary. Here’s a list of what I think makes a great sex scene, though I don’t think all of these things necessarily need to be in the same scene.
1. At least one character with an emotional stake in the proceedings, who needs/wants something from the sex or from the relationship.
2. A character who is hiding something. This may be emotional, physical, or plot-related, but I think it adds a level of tension to the scene.
3. Intense focus from at least one of the characters. If at least one of the characters is deeply involved in what’s going on, I as a reader am usually going to be involved, too.
4. Something new is revealed about at least one of the characters, preferably a thing that implies many other things. The relationship and the characterizations can thus grow and deepen after the scene is over.
5. Economy of action: only the actions essential to the scene are described, i.e., those actions that underline the scene’s emotional or thematic arc, or explicate character, or both. This is mainly because I love tidiness.
What do you like to see in romance novel sex scenes?