Category Archives: writing craft

Conflict

This is one of those posts where I’m writing about something obvious, but writing about it helps me to internalize it. You can’t have a story without plot, and you can’t have a plot without conflict. Conflict is wanting what … Continue reading

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Line Editing, Up Close and Personal

I spent a large portion of the month of April revising The Duke and the Pirate Queen; some of the revisions responded to my editor’s comments, some responded to a workshop critique, and some came from my fevered brain. I … Continue reading

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Dialogue Tricks

This post was originally written for Lauren Dane’s Writerly Wednesday. The first time I tried to write a novel (the one I started over and over and over again), I workshopped it with a very small group of friends. One … Continue reading

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What Does the Reader Need To Know?

Research is fun. Fun. Fun. However, research for the writer’s sake isn’t always needed for the reader’s sake. I get questions about this a lot. The writer may need to know the mechanics of a specific task. For example, in … Continue reading

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Elements Critique

A writer friend once commented that sometimes she needed a critique on plot and sometimes she needed a critique on character. And I think she was absolutely right. Characters make plot, of course. And plot affects character, giving them things … Continue reading

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Writing Emotion

This post is more questions than answers. I’ve been thinking about what makes some fiction so much more satisfying to read than other fiction, aside from factors such as story elements one loves, a well-constructed plot, and elegant prose style. … Continue reading

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Unrealistic Dialogue

It’s a pretty common observation that dialogue in a story is unrealistic. There are all sorts of linguistic studies that relate to “real life” dialogue. Here’s a pretty good introduction to sociolonguistics, for example. One of the things I learned … Continue reading

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The Long and the Short of It

How do we decide a length for our stories? I think a lot of it has to do with the stories themselves.A friend of mine used to say that novels didn’t adapt as well into feature films as short stories … Continue reading

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Dissonant Details

The ultimate goal of sharing one’s writing is for the reader to “get” what you’ve written. Seen from that point of view, what you’ve written is less important than how the reader interprets it. So it’s important to try and … Continue reading

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Musings on Discovering/Implementing Theme in The Moonlight Mistress

Someone asked me fairly recently about how I use theme. For me, I might think about theme ahead of time, but it doesn’t really start to manifest until I’ve written a certain amount of the manuscript. Then I start realizing … Continue reading

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