Mira Lyn Kelly – Getting the Call – Exploring Category Romance

Please welcome my guest, Mira Lyn Kelly!

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All about “The Call”

If you’re an aspiring author, you’ll know what I mean when I say we all have fantasies about “The Call.” Some may be vague and general, others elaborate and detailed. Mine were definitely of the latter variety, and usually followed by self-directed mental disclaimers about realistic expectations and directives to spend my creative energy on more productive endeavors…Like actually writing the stories that might result in such success.

I’m Mira Lyn Kelly and on August 28th, 2009 I got “The Call.” And it was even better than I’d dreamed it would be. Here’s how it happened.

I love reading and my bookshelves are overflowing with romances of every genre and variety. Thrillers, Suspense, Regency, Paranormal, Smokin’ Hot, you name it–if it’s on my shelf there’s a romance worked in. And Category is one of my favorites. For me, they’re one-day-reads. Intense love stories packed into concise packages where every page promises spectacular interaction between your hero and heroine, fast ramping conflicts and leave-me-sighing-with-pleasure Happily Ever Afters.

These were the stories I wanted to write. So when Harlequin Presents/Modern Heat announced their Instant Seduction Contest (back in February 2008), I saw it for the don’t-miss opportunity it was. Editors for the line were going to be evaluating the entries and 1st place won an editor for a year! Wow. Great way to skip the slush pile, right? Yes!

So I started by making sure I was familiar with the line and read pretty much everything they had available…Such hard work, lol. I know! I also took advantage of all the tips and tools Harlequin provides on their website and through posts in the iheartpresents blog. I picked an idea that fit the line and went to work.

Proofed and polished, in my entry went.

When the contest winners were announced, I was not among them. Disappointing, but I’d learned a lot from the process and wasn’t about to give up. I read the winners’ entries and what the editors had to say about them, trying to take away as much information as possible. I had a million ideas and was ready to get back on the horse.

And then I got a letter. A request for the full manuscript from my entry! Though I hadn’t placed in the contest itself, the editors liked my voice and wanted to see the rest of the story.

When I sent in my manuscript, “the Call” fantasies really kicked into high gear. But when the first call came in, it wasn’t to offer a contract. It was actually better than that. It was direction. An editor taking the time to discuss my manuscript, my writing style, what worked and what did not. It was eye opening and informative and an incredible opportunity to improve my work. One I was most definitely interested in taking advantage of. Even though it meant basically rewriting the second half of my book. Ouch.

The revisions were tough, but in the end I was thrilled with the changes. The characters were more believable. The conflict more intense. The story more engaging. I hoped it was enough. I sent it back in and waited. And waited. Checking my email every day to see if my editor (I’d begun to think of her as mine already!) would schedule another call.

Then a few weeks ago, the phone rang out of the blue. There was that lovely English accent coming through the line, saying everything I’d ever hoped to hear. My heart went into overdrive, the tears came. and I made some rather unprofessional and loud squealing noises that hopefully didn’t result in any permanent hearing loss for my editor. This was “the Call.” A two book deal with the first releasing May 2010 in the UK. Yay!!

What’s wonderful about Harlequin is that the opportunities just keep coming. There’s another writing contest going on now, so if Presents/Modern Heat is a line you’re interested in, take advantage. Here’s the link to the contest for 2009 and good luck!

Thank you so much, Victoria, for including me in your lovely blog. It’s been an exciting ride and I’m thrilled to have the chance to share the details.

Mira Lyn Kelly

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Thanks, Mira! I’m looking forward to reading your book in May!

Stop by tomorrow for a guest post from Silhouette Nocturne author Lori Devoti.

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Exploring Category Romance – Elle Kennedy

Please welcome my guest, Elle Kennedy.

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Romantic Suspense: Finding a Balance

When I first started submitting to Silhouette, I have to admit, I had no idea what I was doing. I read Intimate Moments (now Silhouette Romantic Suspense), and I thought, I could write these. But after several rejections, I realized that reading romantic suspense is a lot easier than writing it. So before I submitted again, I sat down and decided to really nail down that balance of romance and suspense.

My biggest problem is focusing on one and not the other. I tend to get caught up in the romance and then have chapters and chapters without advancing the suspense aspect, or vice versa. Even after I sold my first SRS, Silent Watch, this problem was still evident. In her edits, my editor would say, “Hey, what’s going on with the serial killer? We haven’t seen or heard from him in 3 chapters.”

It was these edits that made me see writing category romantic suspense requires a different approach than if I were writing a longer, single title. The short length of SRS means I can’t take my time and draw out things slowly. I tried that in my first draft, only to wind up with a rushed ending in order not to go over the word count. In my revisions, I learned to speed up the pace, keep both the romance and suspense in the reader’s mind for every chapter, and make each element have an impact on the other.

In Silent Watch, the threat of the villain causes the heroine to become stronger, which in turn makes her realize that time is short, and she can’t close her heart up to men forever. For the hero, the romance, falling for the heroine, make him more determined to catch the killer, in turn advancing the suspense plot.

After Silent Watch, I thought I nailed the balance…and then I wrote Deadly Reunion, a daily online read at eHarlequin. Again, my first draft was a disaster, and my critique partner came back saying, “What’s happening with the villain? I forgot he was even around!” So I had to go back, and find the darn balance again.

Now, as I’m working on my second SRS, I’ve developed a new system. Before I write each chapter, I jot down the romance elements I need to have in there, as well as the suspense factors. In SRS, the romance is usually a bit more prominent, but it can’t take over the entire story either. The danger needs to be an ever present part of the story, an underlying threat that raises the tension and as a result, heightens the romance.

I think I’ve got it this time, though. My new system of planning ahead, and not flying by the seat of my pants, is definitely helping. Let’s just hope I keep it up for the rest of this book!

Elle

Online read link.

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Thanks, Elle!

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Laura Barth on Category Slush Piles – Exploring Category Romance

Please welcome my guest, Laura Barth! Laura works with the Harlequin Blaze and Harlequin American Romance lines.

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Many hopeful writers probably wonder about the process that results in either a rejection letter, a revision request, or–for the lucky few–a contract. So I thought I’d try to dispel some of the mystery by explaining the typical path of a category-romance slush manuscript from the time you submit it to the time you hear back.

As an editorial assistant, I’m the front line for all slush manuscripts and queries that come to Harlequin Blaze and Harlequin American Romance. I have to make the initial decision about whether to pass something on to the editors for their consideration or send a rejection letter. We receive many submissions, so we must be very selective.

However, before the submission reaches the point where it’s being rejected or passed on to an editor, it almost always has to do time in the slush pile. The reason for this is simply that we have so few opportunities to deal with slush. New submissions usually get put at the bottom of the pile, so that we’re responding to the oldest submissions first. By the time we’re able to really look at it, a manuscript may have been in the slush pile for several months. Slush doesn’t have deadlines, unlike everything else in an editor’s life, and when you’re waiting until you have some free time to look at the slush… Well, you can see where that leads.

Despite our busy schedules, we’re always on the lookout for promising writers who have either come to us with an excellent manuscript or a manuscript that isn’t quite there, but has a lot of potential. We often encourage such authors to revise their work or send us other projects. While we may already have a solid stable of authors, as editors, we can’t resist mentoring new and promising writers.

When an editor has a manuscript she thinks should be considered for publication, the usual process is to write a memo to the senior editor, outlining why the manuscript should be selected and suggesting any changes that might strengthen the work. The senior editor then reads the manuscript and makes the final decision.

Probably the most memorable day for a new editor is the first time she gets to phone a slush author and offer to buy her book. This is what makes the time we spend reading less-than-stellar submissions worthwhile. When I contracted my first new author, I had the pleasure of giving the good news to someone I’d been working with closely for over a year. We were both so excited we could barely have a normal conversation. In my four years working at Harlequin, that was the best day by far.

So, to all those whose work is languishing in the slush pile, I say keep your chin up. Just because you haven’t heard anything yet doesn’t mean your manuscript isn’t sitting at the top of an editor’s To Read pile, waiting to wow her.

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Thanks, Laura!

Tune in tomorrow for a post from author Elle Kennedy.

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Exploring Category Romance – A Category Romance Is Like a Sonnet

Category romances, also called series romances, are to me the epitome of romance as a genre. They’re short – mostly about 200 pages or 50,000 – 60,000 words long. The term category comes from the various lines such as Harlequin Presents or Silhouette Desire, each of which has specific requirements that may be related to style of plot, subgenre, or level of sexual content. These lines are formed or cancelled as the market for certain types of books grows and changes. An important difference between categories and single title romances is that categories are marketed and distributed more like magazines than like books. Their distribution is thus large, but they are often only shelved in bookstores for a single month.

Out of print categories are often easy to find in used bookstores or online at book swap sites such as BookMooch. I also like that the books are physically not very large or heavy, and thus easy to carry with me while I run errands that involve standing in line.

There is not a lot of room in 55,000 words to tell the complete story of a relationship; the writer must pare everything down to essentials of characterization. In lines such as Silhouette Romantic Suspense, there is also a mystery/suspense plot to consider. Fitting in all of these elements and at the same time emotionally involving the reader is no easy task. I liken it to writing a sonnet, in which idea and form are inextricably linked. And the best categories pack just as much of an emotional punch.

Who are your favorite category authors? Mine are Carla Kelly, who writes Regency-set historicals, and Ruth Wind/Barbara Samuel, who writes contemporaries, usually with suspense elements. More of my favorites are Judith Arnold, Christine Merrill, Julie Cohen, Janice Kay Johnson, Kathleen Korbel, Cheryl Reavis, and Lilian Darcy.

Miranda’s Revenge by Ruth Wind.
The Surgeon’s Lady by Carla Kelly.
Birthright: Welcome to Riverbend by Judith Arnold.
A Wicked Liaison (Harlequin Historical Series) by Christine Merrill.
His For The Taking by Julie Cohen.
Someone Like Her by Janice Kay Johnson.
A Soldier’s Heart by Kathleen Korbel.
The Older Woman by Cheryl Reavis.
A Mother In The Making by Lilian Darcy.

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The Duchess, Her Maid, The Groom and Their Lover Excerpt – Kickass Heroines

This excerpt comes from The Duchess, Her Maid, The Groom and Their Lover.

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“Give us the horses or you die,” the lead rider demanded. He was a big man, heavily bearded and, like all three of the brigands, wearing a mask bound over his eyes and nose.

“No!” the Duchess said.

Henri grinned in reflexive agreement–never the horses!–then his belly went cold with horror. He should have spoken up immediately, said they had money. Except then the brigands might have demanded the money and the horses. Did that matter? There were other horses in the world, much as he loved them. There was only one Duchess.

The lead brigand rode towards the Duchess, blade held out. She backed Guirlande with consummate skill, keeping a distance between them. The brigand said, “Now, lady, we could use some nice mounts like these.”

Henri opened his mouth. She cast him a warning glance, and he closed it. “I’m sure you could,” she said. “However, they are mine.”

“You wouldn’t like to die in the road, would you?”

“You can’t shoot us both,” she said. “The survivor would make quite a lot of trouble for you.”

The archer said, “Want to bet there’d be a survivor?”

Henri thought furiously. He could rear Tulipe and perhaps distract their horses, allowing the Duchess to run, but that would expose his horse’s belly to both swords and arrow, and they might cut her down as she ran. How could he use his knife? Kaspar’s singletail would have been of more use right now. He sidled Tulipe left, then right, trying to draw their attention away from the Duchess. Maybe that would be enough, a distraction so she and Guirlande could run.

“Don’t move!” someone shouted.

Henri froze. Casting his eyes to the trees, he recognized Lilas first, the small figure on her back second. Sylvie held a long-barreled pistol in each hand. The brigands were easily in range of her shot, and he did not doubt she could hit anything at which she aimed.

The first rider wheeled his horse to face her, while the second took over menacing the Duchess. “There are three of us, if you haven’t noticed,” he called.

A shot ripped the air. Henri quickly controlled Tulipe. Guirlande barely flinched. The archer had lost his bow, and was clutching at his shoulder. Sylvie dropped her spent pistol, seized another from her belt, and shouted, “Two of you. I would go now, if you wish to live.”

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c. Victoria Janssen 2009

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Short Fiction Questions & Inspirations Playlist

While I’m at it with the Short Fiction FAQs, does anyone have any additional questions I should include? I’m going to make a compiled file and post it on my website.

And, since it’s Friday and I should have some content, this is a version of my most recent playlist, all songs I find inspirational in one way or another. Well, except for the first one, which is the lead-in, and has a different mood.

Down at the bottom of the post is an Amazon.com MP3 widget I’m trying out, that has links to the songs. If you’ve got experience with MP3 widgets, please share!

1. “Crawling in the Dark,” Hoobastank
2. “Song of Choice,” Solas (Peggy Seeger cover)
3. “Rise Up,” Yves Larock
4. “One-Trick Pony,” Nelly Furtado
5. “Virus of the Mind,” Heather Nova
6. “Another Train,” The Poozies (Phil Ochs cover)
7. “Mainstream,” Thea Gilmore
8. “Walk the Walk,” Poe
9. “Hammer and a Nail,” Indigo Girls
10. “Don’t Fence Me In,” David Byrne (Cole Porter cover)
11. “Learning to Fly,” Tom Petty
12. “In These Shoes,” Kirsty Maccoll
13. “Unwritten,” Natasha Bedingfield
14. “The Rainbow Connection,” Sarah McLachlan
15. “Turn the World Around,” Harry Belafonte
16. “It’s Not Easy Being Green,” Jesse Palter (Kermit the Frog cover)
17. “Finale (Allegro giacoso, ma non troppo),” Concerto for Violin & Orchestra in A min Op_53, Dvorak



The theme for Snippet Saturday tomorrow is “Kickass Heroines.”

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Short Fiction FAQ: Part Three

Question: What is a possible path to breaking in to invitation-only print anthologies, if I have already sold stories to magazines?

I would first find out which publishers issue the sort of anthology that’s suited to your stories, then look at the list of authors to see if you have any contacts: authors you know, friends of authors you know, authors who share an agent with you or one of your friends, that sort of thing. I would then simply ask how they did it and if they’re willing to put you in touch with an editor. This method is probably restricted to those who’ve already published short stories.

Another option would be to contact the magazine editors who bought your stories and ask if they have any contacts in book publishing, for instance if the magazines and book lines are owned by the same corporation.

A third option might be viable after you have more of a track record with print anthologies: create and submit your own anthology with co-authors, for instance those with whom you share a publisher.

Question: I haven’t been able to find a suitable market for a story within my genre. What are my options?

It might be helpful to think “outside the box.” What are the other themes in your story? There are magazines that publish stories about travel, about environmental issues, etc.. If it’s not an obvious fit anywhere, be prepared to submit to a wide range of places; sometimes a story that’s slightly unusual for a given market is an easier sale. I’ve had stories hang around for years after I wrote them, and suddenly an appropriate market arises. My first novel came out of a story like that.

Browsing Duotrope might be helpful.
Choosing Short Fiction Markets.

Short Fiction FAQ: Part One.

Short Fiction FAQ: Part Two.

The Desire to Publish.

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Short Fiction FAQ – Part Two

Question: Is there a market for erotic flash fiction? Will agents and editors think I can’t write novels if most of my sales are short fiction?

There is not a huge paying market for flash fiction, but there are some markets. I would browse this page regularly.

For publications that don’t specifically mention accepting flash fiction or short-shorts, it rarely hurts to ask. The editor might need something tiny to fill in a gap. I’ve recently sold a couple of flash fiction reprints for that purpose.

I don’t think there’s any danger of being thought incapable of writing a novel unless you never write one. In my opinion, it’s always a plus to have some publication experience.

Question: What are the word count limits of various types of short fiction?

In general, the story should be as long as it needs to be, but I realize that isn’t much help! I always check the specific guidelines of the publication first, as definitions vary. If a story seems really well suited to a particular market, and is close to the right length but a little too short or too long, I might submit anyway, or I might trim or expand it just a little.

Here are some rough length guidelines:

Flash fiction: usually means less than 1,000 words. Sometimes a market will specify a word count. I’ve done “flash fiction” that was only 100 words long.

Short story: from about 1,500 words up to about 7,500 words. Depends on the market, however. Often, longer stories are harder to place because they take up more room in an anthology. Many markets don’t want anything longer than 5,000 words.

Novelette: 7,500-20,000 words in some markets; The Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America (SFWA) defines it as 7,500-17,500 words.

Novella: 20-50,000 words by some definitions. SFWA defines it as 17,500-40,000 words, and anything over 40K as a novel. “National Novel Writing Month” says 50K is a novel. In reality, an adult novel shorter than 60K is very rare. Young adult usually runs 40-60K. I’ve noticed that a lot of electronic markets seem to prefer novella length to novel-length.

Related post: Short Fiction FAQ: Part One.

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Short Fiction FAQ – Part One

Establishing yourself as a writer of short fiction can pay a little money and, more importantly, establish a “track record” which can help in making valuable contacts among your fellow writers, editors, and agents. Short fiction also provides experience with writing to spec (answering calls for submissions), dealing with editors, reading contracts, locating reprint opportunities, and discovering the range of your writing skills.

I recently answered some questions about publishing short fiction, and thought my answers might be of use or interest, so here they are.

Question: How do you find good models for short fiction submissions?

I think it’s important to read authors of the genre you intend to write, and it’s better to read as wide a range as possible.

For erotica, the approach I used was to go to a local bookstore and sit down in the coffee shop with a pile of anthologies. I soon became familiar with the most prolific editors and got an idea of their tastes. I also began recognizing the names of frequent contributors, and getting an idea of what themes seemed overused and what might be a fresher approach. Maxim Jakubowski’s Mammoth Book of Best New Erotica series is especially useful to look at, because it contains only reprints; by checking the copyright information on the stories, you can get a broad idea about a wide variety of markets of all kinds (book anthologies, novel excerpts, magazines, online markets).

For romance, I think a good approach is to look at the anthologies coming out in mass market paperback or trade paperback and shelved in the romance section. Most of those will include 3-4 writers. In general, those anthologies are invitation-only, but I think it’s a good idea to familiarize yourself with the style and story structures.

Question: How do you find markets for particular types of short stories?

I recommend using the search engine on Duotrope, which will let you choose options such as pay rate, length, and theme. They’re a good site, but if you have any doubts about a particular publication, it’s worth checking out Writer Beware.

For erotica calls for submissions, my favorite site is Erotica-Readers.com, because it’s updated regularly.

Question: How do you interpret guidelines on calls for submissions?

So far as guidelines go, I stay as close to the concrete requests as possible: word count, genre, theme, location. If there are no specifics, I look for guidance in previous work by that editor or from that magazine or anthology. Beyond that, I think it helps a great deal to be different, so long as you’re within the basic requirements. Easier said than done, I know!

When writing for a specific anthology, I discard the most obvious story topics and try to take a different angle. For instance, an early sale I made was to a lesbian erotica anthology titled Tough Girls. I immediately realized that a lot of submissions would involve female soldiers, criminals, etc.. My idea was to write about a female soldier, but I set the story in the future on a spaceship, which turned out to be much rarer than contemporary settings. Mingling science fiction or fantasy with my erotica also helped with themeless anthologies such as Best Lesbian Erotica.

I can’t overstate how useful it is to read in the market to which you plan to submit. If you know the tastes of the major editors, you’re already a bit ahead of your competition. If you’ve read a number of stories published in the last couple of years, you have a much better idea of what ideas have been done to death.

Short Fiction FAQ, Part Two.

Short Fiction FAQ, Part Three.

Related Post: Making It Good.

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Writing is In the Mind

So much of writing is in the mind.

Not just coming up with ideas and arranging words into sentences. To write novels, to keep up the sustained effort necessary, a psychological approach to writing is often required. For me, that is. I have to bully myself into it. Cajole. Nag. Reassure. I have to be all things to myself, just to survive putting between 85,000 and 100,000 words on paper in sequence.

The chief obstacle to most writing is popularly called “ass in chair.” If a writer doesn’t sit down and write (well, I suppose you could stand!), and physically write or type, writing doesn’t happen. It sounds silly, but it’s true. The stories in our heads are not writing. Once they are laid out on paper, they are in a completely different form; I think of it sometimes in terms of space opera. We can write about a space opera battle, and it’s two-dimensional, words on a page. In our minds, the space battle is full-color, three-dimensional, ships whizzing off in every direction. You can try to portray that in words, but the reader isn’t going to get exactly what was in your head. They’ll make their own pictures. But unless you write down what you can of that vision, there will be nothing for a reader to read.

So, there’s getting yourself to write. Then there’s making yourself keep writing. Sure, you can write a sentence a day, and eventually you will have a novel. My laptop screensaver says “One sentence at a time.” But if you’re on deadline, you don’t have that luxury. My optimum pace is 1000 words every day, sometimes 500 words if 1000 isn’t working out. I use that wordcount goal to keep myself writing. Didn’t write 500 words yet? Keep writing. When it’s done, you can stop.

Often, I have to push myself. I wrote 439 words. That’s close to 500, but not quite. One more paragraph would push me over, that’s 100 words, easily. So I go back to the file, and write one more paragraph. Whups! Only 479 words. That’s close enough, isn’t it? No? I write one more paragraph, and go over 500. Going over the goal is even better than meeting it. And if it’s a good day, I might become involved enough with the story, at some point, to keep going long past my goal. Every extra sentence helps, because it is one less sentence I have to write tomorrow.

One sentence at a time.

Related posts:

Zero drafting.

How To Write a Novel in 72 Easy Steps.

The Daily Grind.

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